Winning Writing from Years 2 to 4

Winning writing from our Year 2 to 4 poets:

I Wish I was Famous - by Waka (Y3)  

                                                                             

I wish I was famous

and had ten top hits

I wish I was famous

but girls would chase me

and it would be

irritating

(Note from Mrs K:  Waka's poem was a personal favourite!)

I Wish - by Xavier S (Y3)

I wish I smelt like perfume

I wish I was fast like Turbo

I wish I could be covered
in robot parts
I wish...

I Wish I was Famous and Rich - by Nehemiah L (Y3)

I wish I was famous and rich.

I wish I was famous because I can sing.

I wish I was famous so people could see me.

I wish I was famous...

but I would get sick of signing autographs.

I wish I lived in Candyland - by Hannah M (Y3)

I wish I lived in Candyland

I wish I could drink chocolate milk

I wish I could eat chocolate fingers

I wish I had a bed made of marshmallows

I wish I could eat trees of liquorice

I wish the snow was made of ice cream

I wish the clouds were made of candyfloss

I wish water was lemonade

I wish soap was sugar

I Wish I Could Change the World - by Hannah L-M (Y3)

I wish I could change the world

I wish every piece of grass were curled

I wish I owned every shop

I wish popcorn did not pop

I wish I could breathe ice

I wish I could get advice from mice

                         (Hannah's poem was selected as a judge's favourite!)

I Wish I had a Sheep - by Bridget G (Y3)

I wish that I had a sheep

I wish that I had a sheep so I could

                           be Bo-Peep

I wish my sheep did tricks

I wish my sheep picked

                           at the hay

I wish that it had thumbs

I wish that it got plums

I wish that it drank rum

 (Bridget's poem was selected as a judge's favourite!)

The Lady Who Stood There - by Sacha W (Y4)

Her eyes were as blue as the sea.

Her smile was a perfect as a perfect piece of art.

She was as tall as a skyscraper.

She had a dress as pink as a marshmallow.

Her hair was as blond and straight as a yellow plank in the playground.

Her high heels were as pink as a rose.

She looked like a fashion model.

She smelt like lemons and limes.

Her dog looked like a small lion.

Her perfectness was as perfect as perfect could be.

(Sacha's poem was also a judge's favourite!)

I wish - by Soverin (Y3)

I wish there were no teacher.

I wish lollies could rain down to the ground.

I wish I was rich

I wish I could fly.

I wish I was fast.

I wish we didn’t do homework or math.

I wish - by Vann G (Y3)

I wish I could fly

I wish the houses and the school

were made out of chocolate

I wish Turbo was real to race


I wish I was famous - by Michael V (Y3)

I wish I was famous and rich
     so I could get a mansion
I wish I was famous
     because girls would chase me
I wish I was famous
     but I don't like the paparazzi

I am Carlos - by Carlos S-J (Y2)

I am cool

I like skateboarding

I don’t like pumpkin

I’m afraid of heights

I wish to be a lizard

I dream of being an All-Black

I pretend my toys are real

I can score a goal

I am Carlos

I am Finn - by Finn D (Y2)

I am happy

I like Woody

I don’t like fleas

   because they are itchy (they come from my cat)

I’m afraid of sharks

I wish for a dog

I dream of super heroes

I pretend to be a secret agent, like Joe 90

I can climb trees

I am Finn

I am Jorja - by Jorja S (Y2)

I am happy

I like cats

I don’t like spiders

I’m afraid of scary noises

I wish I was a mermaid

I dream of having ten cats

I pretend the characters of Jack Frost are real

I can add 2 + 2

I am Jorja

I am Noah - by Noah H (Y2)

I am cool

I like Lego City

I don’t like the flu

I’m afraid of robbers

I dream of funny fish

I pretend I’m going on holiday

I can be really funny and silly

I wish I could have magical powers

       If I had the magic power of invisibility

       I would be good at hide and seek

       Rocco would say “Where are you?”

       for one thousand days!

I am Noah